attila2452 Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 http://attilahajzer.host-ed.net/Please tell me what you think of my new website portfolio update.I have decided to update it because i felt that my old one was way too bland and grey, not enough color or exitement. so i spiced it up a bunch!please tell me if there is anything missing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Den-Dezyn Posted April 26, 2011 Share Posted April 26, 2011 Hi AttilaYour site is easy on the eye and simple to navigate i do however have a couple of suggestions the first is to do a thorough spellcheck on your site there were many errors that create a less than professional feeling the other is to work on your contact page the form looks cramped and dull in comparison with the rest of the site. Good luck and will check back to see your improvements. Den Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
attila2452 Posted April 27, 2011 Author Share Posted April 27, 2011 Hi AttilaYour site is easy on the eye and simple to navigate i do however have a couple of suggestions the first is to do a thorough spellcheck on your site there were many errors that create a less than professional feeling the other is to work on your contact page the form looks cramped and dull in comparison with the rest of the site. Good luck and will check back to see your improvements. DenOkay. so i have also put the portfolio up as a critique on another website. (CSS-Tricks) and honestly they really didn't like it... here was some of the comments :"Definitely get rid of the lawn!"and my favorite: "Your portfolio looks like you just drew boxes in illustrator and placed text over them. I really don't know what to say, your bio says you have 4 years of experience. This isn't the site of someone with four years of design experience."but honestly it helped me . so i took my time to use Photoshop. something i havn't done in a while. and got this!http://www.flickr.com/photos/attilahajzer/...in/photostream/http://www.flickr.com/photos/attilahajzer/...in/photostream/please let me know what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cousineaug Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 http://attilahajzer.host-ed.net/Please tell me what you think of my new website portfolio update.I have decided to update it because i felt that my old one was way too bland and grey, not enough color or exitement. so i spiced it up a bunch!please tell me if there is anything missing.The link at host-ed seems to be dead. Of the two pictures I actually like the orange header better. I"d like to see it in HTML for a better "feel". The Blue template is softer on the eye but also has no ZING . . . sort of a tradeoff.Guy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
attila2452 Posted April 27, 2011 Author Share Posted April 27, 2011 The link at host-ed seems to be dead. Of the two pictures I actually like the orange header better. I"d like to see it in HTML for a better "feel". The Blue template is softer on the eye but also has no ZING . . . sort of a tradeoff.GuyBoth of the designs have been re-vampedhttp://www.flickr.com/photos/attilahajzer/...in/photostream/andhttp://www.flickr.com/photos/attilahajzer/...in/photostream/but the questions is, would they work as a portfolio website? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thescientist Posted April 29, 2011 Share Posted April 29, 2011 I think the second link would be a good direction to go in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
attila2452 Posted May 1, 2011 Author Share Posted May 1, 2011 I think the second link would be a good direction to go in.Ive updated my portfolio site.http://attilahajzer.host-ed.net/take a look at it and help me out with anything that may need fixing.PS. i am aware of grammatical errors, i haven't yet gone over that 100%so anything else other then that would be greatly appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ApocalypeX Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 Wow I've been gone for a few months and your designs have improved so much! Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cousineaug Posted May 9, 2011 Share Posted May 9, 2011 so anything else other then that would be greatly appreciated.Look very nice. I like the background and uncluttered look. This is a professional looking website which is the image you want to portray. I like the fact that all pages seem to validate ok. The only negative I can think of is the cont6act me page where the white boxes jump off the screen. Consider giving them a light grey background...or perhaps even a very very light orange to go with your theme.Guy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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