elementis0 Posted November 24, 2007 Share Posted November 24, 2007 well i just finished the website layout(i think)and would like some critiquing of this layout before i go further with this.so please critique as harsh as ya want i dont mind :)its for a web design competition im going to enter so i need the layout to look really good.i know the code isnt completely valid yet so dont say anything about that i will get it validated without having to change the layout. but it works all the way back to IE 5.0 so im not complaining.heres the url:http://www.freewebs.com/flowerfestival Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bjornhjorth Posted November 25, 2007 Share Posted November 25, 2007 I like the layout of the site very flowery But I think that the main information needs work, looks very dull and dont really draw my eye. my eye rather go to the flower banner and the meny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RayHowell Posted February 4, 2008 Share Posted February 4, 2008 Hi, notice you posted this in Nov. so don't know if your project is still alive? The layout is kinda ok BUT - looking at it as a viewer, not a high flying designer, where are the flowers; I like flowers; this is about a festival - where are the flowers? I dont know if this would break your design idea or not but I would consider placing a really good fading flower graphic in the blank area too the left of your page. Like the post above; you draw to the header then stay there - you want the viewer to go to your text. On a positive note I really like your navigation tool bar - javascript? Abstract thought which I'm sure you will dimiss - the gray is too masculne - while gardeners were traditionally male the flower appeal tends towards the feminine; to suit your logo could you have a back ground - light opaque - of pink swirling to yellow then white with your text floating/hovering above (by using subtle shadow) - sort of suggesting insects ready to land? Goodluck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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