bigsilk 0 Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 Visit My Website Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Skemcin 13 Posted September 18, 2009 Report Share Posted September 18, 2009 I like the clean design and you didn't make the mistake (and pet-peeve) than many designers do - you didn't over design it.If I was forced to offer some criticism, the only thing I could suggest (with so little content in your template area) is to turn the template section into a case study narrative or if that doesn't apply, the narrate something like what you were thinking when design the look and feel, etc. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Synook 47 Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 (edited) I have to say the copyright notice sticking out the right like that looks a bit weird (Chrome 3.0 / Windows) - maybe bring it back into alignment with the header. A bit of a gap between the menu and content wouldn't go amiss either.A nicer error message on the contact form would be good too. Edited September 19, 2009 by Synook Quote Link to post Share on other sites
thescientist 231 Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 very nice and very clean, good style. I second the contact form error message thing too. Other than that, nice work. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
AnonymousX 0 Posted September 19, 2009 Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 I really like what is happening in the background. I'd like to see what the design would look like if you took the green rectangle out, and continued with the subtle background design with the title still bold. If not that, I'd like to see what the background design (circular pattern) looks like if you took the rectangle out and continued it with a subtle green.As a whole the design looks very nice though. Keep up the good work. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
bigsilk 0 Posted September 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2009 Thanks, everyone. I was trying hard to incorporate as much of my newly acquired knowledge of CSS without 'jerking-off' all over the site. We've all seen it, like people who make fliers at work and use every font in the book...That rounded corner box is all CSS. I suppose I could make it a bit smaller, expose more of the page.Right now I'm working on making 30 (yeah, thirty) 12-page templates for a guy who's introducing a new service for the iPhone. I'll definitely be occupying more of that template page.As a matter of such, I'm probably not going to be doing a whole lotta work on my personal site for a while. It just might get a 'gone fishing' page until then.Again, thanks for the critiques and the kind words both.Surely you'll be seeing me in the AAAaaauuuggghhh! HELP! pages in the very near future.Adam Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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