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Just looking for comments of all sorts. Coding redundancies, spelling errors, bad layout, unclear buttons, etc.I am open to all critiques.http://www.beta.zeitgeist-toronto.com/Quick background on me. Been a amateur coder/scripter for about 3 years and have really been upping the ante since about 6 months now finally diving head first into JavaScript and hoping to start understanding php and databasing so I can start making dynamic content.Thanks in advance for your critiques.

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Hey DP, i'll be honest i didn't really bother reading all the text in the website for spelling errors (english is not my first language after all so i probably wouldn't do a good job!) but i'll give feedback for your layout. I really liked it, it is clean, easy to navigate, and i like the colours you used. Only got one minor thing to add that is from a personal point of view. In http://www.zeitgeist-toronto.com/ you could move the content in the middle of the page so that there isn't so much white space, (well the same space will be there but i think it will be better for users' eye if the content was vertically centered, or at least moved a bit down). You could also change the font size of the Enter Here, or make a button for it. But those are just personal prefferences. In overall good job ;)

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Hey DP, i'll be honest i didn't really bother reading all the text in the website for spelling errors (english is not my first language after all so i probably wouldn't do a good job!) but i'll give feedback for your layout. I really liked it, it is clean, easy to navigate, and i like the colours you used. Only got one minor thing to add that is from a personal point of view. In http://www.zeitgeist-toronto.com/ you could move the content in the middle of the page so that there isn't so much white space, (well the same space will be there but i think it will be better for users' eye if the content was vertically centered, or at least moved a bit down). You could also change the font size of the Enter Here, or make a button for it. But those are just personal prefferences. In overall good job ;)
Ha has I was supposed to only link to the beta sub domain. The splash page is just a temporary thing that I did not put in... Thanks though for the comments.
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Overall, it's clean - it gets the point across - your message is clear and concise.If I were working on it, I would ad just a smidgen of padding in the CSS (+5px). Not much is needed. I would also make the Background color just a little bit deeper so the drop shadows would "pop" a bit. No frame on the FAQ page. Other than that, I'd call it a finished site.I like the creativity in the photographs and the video. Repeating a brand is always always good so that I liked. Who can resist free hugs? Can I sign up for mailing list? I'll join. -Grahamalluringmedia.net

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Overall, it's clean - it gets the point across - your message is clear and concise. If I were working on it, I would ad just a smidgen of padding in the CSS (+5px). Not much is needed. I would also make the Background color just a little bit deeper so the drop shadows would "pop" a bit. No frame on the FAQ page. Other than that, I'd call it a finished site. I like the creativity in the photographs and the video. Repeating a brand is always always good so that I liked. Who can resist free hugs?Can I sign up for mailing list? I'll join. -Grahamalluringmedia.net
Feel free to join the mailing list, so when should we expect you in toronto? L-D
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Hi I think its well done overall. to be honest I don't really like the social icons popping up out of the holes... at least not with it so close to the bottom of that div. it looks like a display error almost until you realize they pop up. maybe raise them up a little bit? or re think em? or forget I said anything? :)

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